Ooooh, I love love love it! This is so exciting! I'm a tad disappointed that VM and LE weren't together at the beginning of your script, but I'm sure they will find their way back to each other in the end! LoVe forever ;)
My only hesitation is that Joanna was instantly trusted, and dismissed, without much consideration from Veronica. I know that's how VM does things, but Joanna should have been better introduced. And the argument in the hospital wasn't entirely convincing.
But apart from that, my VM cravings have got their much needed fix! I look forward to reading the next part, hope it comes real soon!
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Shana
1/30/2009 08:39:17 am
It was great! Keep writing more for me to read and imagine I saw it on t.v.
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Mary and Louise
2/4/2009 12:49:19 am
Hello Ingrid and Shana Thank you so much for your comments. We are so glad you enjoyed the script, and we hope you participate in the LoVe Campaign. Thanks!
